Many eyes...
... make bugs shallow; maybe this works for draft legislation, too.
Instead of unfocussed beefing to our MP's why don't we divide up the draft bill between us, and give just our bit a good read, then pool our problems, to be distributed to said MPs. After all, there's a wealth of expertise here, a wide range of opinions, and a fortnight to go before the second reading.
However, as I post this, the draft bill does not appear on legislation.gov.uk. Does anyone know where to get a copy?
Edit: Found it