Mostly seems a good set of reccomendations
I live in France, so I read the 3 pages in French.
Passwords: they didn't say "use a separate password for each application". Changing every month is stupid, that's been debunked many times. Changing every 6 months is probably about right.
The papers distinguish between secret and confidential. Secret get its own treatment. For confidential, use a landline. You don't need to encrypt on a desktop PC - its not mobile. But you must encrypt on anything that can be lost or stolen. Lots of organizations should have that rule !
Don't plug anything mobile into your desktop box, even just to charge it. Says a lot about the chaos you can do to a PC if you can corrupt someone's smartphone...
Generally I would say that the memo is basic common sense.