Legalese
Privacy notices suffer from the same problem most any other legal document suffers these days: excessive use of "Legalese". Why all this "party in the first part" drivel?
Sometimes, I wonder if a law should be passed that demands that all future legal writings be written in terse but concise language that anyone can read and understand quickly. For example, a privacy notice could read:
"We may use information ABOUT you (but not tracable to you) to form statistics, and we may be forced to turn over information if demanded by the law, but we will keep your personal information private otherwise. Should this not be the case, you may sue us under the law."
Perhaps such an act could also include this line: "Make a bill or legal notice too lengthy, expect to spend up to a year in jail and to pay the costs of trying you."